First book gets a make over!

[Debra J Edwards]

Wow! Have you seen the new cover for the first book on the website? It's pretty amazing. Tara Bush, the illustrator for the second book, was has pulled it off once again.
The new covers will appear in the shops early next year as the text needs to be reprinted too. Look out for it!

Tell me what you think. Do you like it?

What do you think the third book will look like?

[ella]

Hi
I like How Your delevopling your books and Your still Improving Which is great.I look froard to seeing Your New Book and My Freind used to be a student of Yours And Wishes You well she said You we The Best Teacher
thnksx ella

[ella]

I Like How Your Book links From Realitly Of teenagers And Fantasy Of Faries
Good Luck With the Third Bookx

[ella]

I like the Idea of the 1st book cover Linking to the 2nd one i also think that it is more intriging than the first copy For the third I think You should keep the style of the second book but add Faint glitter to The forground so You Get the idea of Both bookcover Styles.
Thanking Your for Letting me Share My ideas On this Inspiring website
ella
(Your cyber freind)

[James Antoniou]

Dear Mrs. Edwards,

As I have told you I am writing my own book and I would like to show it to you. The other day, I accidentily deleted my book when I was half way through writing it, so I had to start again. Here is the prologue, but I only typed it out yesterday, so there is probably a lot of mistakes.

PROLOGUE

Many millions of years ago, the planet Jupiter lived in happiness; in the morning the birds would sing, in the daytime, the zeedonks and tigons would stroll in the parks and the Juvian children would play, and when the sun set, every shade of orange and yellow would flood the sky with colour.
But in 2,000,000bc, everything changed; an evil witch named Evemarda invaded Jupiter. She spread a poisonous gas named zerkon all over the planet, killing billions.
There was only one place uncontaminated from zerkon gas: a huge never ending storm named The Great Red Spot.
Nowadays, Jupiter is burning, burning with zerkon gas, and Juvians live only indoors, in the cold, dimly lit interior of a glass dome in the middle of The Great Red Spot. It is a myth how the dome was built, but most Juvians believe there was a survivor of the Jupiter invasion named Sir Henry Wolften, whom somehow built the dome, but there is no proof of this, except a huge cobalt statue of a Juvian standing in the centre of the dome with the name Sir Henry Wolften engraved at the bottom.
Nobody knows why Evemarda invaded Jupiter, or how Sir Henry Wolften would of managed to walk to the middle of The Great Red Spot to build the dome. There are still many questions to be answered about the Jupiter invasion, but legend has it that when Evemarda dies, Jupiter will turn back into the happy planet it used to be, however, most believe she is already dead.

Thanks,
James Antoniou

[Debra]

Wow! That first sentence really knocked me out! I love the names you use too. I think we could talk about it beginning so long ago with a witch - it still has to be based in reality remember. We can chat about it though.
James, I really think you have the beginnings of a great book. You write really well. Keep going and remember, each sentence must lead onto the next one and move your story on.

See you soon,
Mrs E x

[SilverZoe]

Hiya!
I love the books and their colours! An idea I had for the cover of Heroes Required was a picture of Aggie in the jar. Oh, it's me, Zoe, from Waterstones.
Love
Zoe with red hair! xxx

[Snowflake]

May 16, 2008 11:11:10 GMT -5 @James Antoniou said:

Dear Mrs. Edwards,

As I have told you I am writing my own book and I would like to show it to you. The other day, I accidentily deleted my book when I was half way through writing it, so I had to start again. Here is the prologue, but I only typed it out yesterday, so there is probably a lot of mistakes.

PROLOGUE

Many millions of years ago, the planet Jupiter lived in happiness; in the morning the birds would sing, in the daytime, the zeedonks and tigons would stroll in the parks and the Juvian children would play, and when the sun set, every shade of orange and yellow would flood the sky with colour.
But in 2,000,000bc, everything changed; an evil witch named Evemarda invaded Jupiter. She spread a poisonous gas named zerkon all over the planet, killing billions.
There was only one place uncontaminated from zerkon gas: a huge never ending storm named The Great Red Spot.
Nowadays, Jupiter is burning, burning with zerkon gas, and Juvians live only indoors, in the cold, dimly lit interior of a glass dome in the middle of The Great Red Spot. It is a myth how the dome was built, but most Juvians believe there was a survivor of the Jupiter invasion named Sir Henry Wolften, whom somehow built the dome, but there is no proof of this, except a huge cobalt statue of a Juvian standing in the centre of the dome with the name Sir Henry Wolften engraved at the bottom.
Nobody knows why Evemarda invaded Jupiter, or how Sir Henry Wolften would of managed to walk to the middle of The Great Red Spot to build the dome. There are still many questions to be answered about the Jupiter invasion, but legend has it that when Evemarda dies, Jupiter will turn back into the happy planet it used to be, however, most believe she is already dead.

Thanks,
James Antoniou

Love your story!!!
from Snowflake

[James Antoniou]

Dear Mrs E. & Snowflake,

I'm really pleased with the stuff you've said about my book! As I said, I accidentally deleted my book half way through writing it, so I had to start again! When I finish the book I will e-mail it to you.

Thanks a lot,
James Antoniou

[Snowflake]

Thanks James Antoniou!!!
Sorry but I haven't got an email address, I'm using my dad's.
Never mind, it will probably be in bookshops soon!
Snowflake
xxx

[Debra J Edwards]

Hi Zoe,
Thanks for visiting. I'm just sorting out the cover and I think that your suggestion is a really good idea. I'm thinking of having an orange background like suns setting ...
Keep reading!

Debra

[Snowflake]

Hi Debra!
I'd forgotten about that post, I did that ages ago.
Thanks- I never thought you'd pick it!

Snow